Thursday 21 February 2013

EARLY SPRING

 
 

Early Spring

 
Silently and shyly, Spring rose today at dawn,
Hiding her pale face behind a filmy veil
As she crept across the land,
Anxious to be undiscovered
Until she knows her time is ripe.
But the all-observing blackbird sees her
And greets her with a single, muted call,
As if too shrill a cry might warn departing Winter
And give him cause to stay.
The yellowhammer also notices her presence,
And the friendly, scarlet-chested robin,
Prancing joyfully along the leafless hedge;
But they maintain a quiet reticence,
Anxious not to advertise her early outing.
Only the raucous rooks are unremitting;
Calling callously with mocking mirth.
And on the sweetly slumbering magnolia,
Long buds swell with finger-pointing promise,
Soon to burst in fragrant floral fantasy.
Soon, too, delirious hares will dance again
In moonlight, over greening fields.


 

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

You are a wonderful writer/poet. "Early Spring" presents a beautiful and poignant portrait for people anywhere. Nice work.

BM

Pete Thompson said...

BM thank you so much for your kind comment - I'm quite overwhelmed>

Anonymous said...

What I love most about your poetry is that one can easily see it's art from a man who understands nature, the creatures with whom he shares the land and who also has the ability to say it in a very heart-felt manner. You do what I have always thought poets should do: make your readers feel what they already know. In a word, beautiful.

BM